3 Comments

  1. Mrs. Kriese

    “How long I had been in that I cave, I do not know. How far down it went, I do not know. All I do know is this was my closest thing to home”

    Love this use of repetition! and earlier, the “deception of sight.” Excellent.

  2. Mrs. Bridges

    Great post! Great writing! I am very impressed! I love the beginning…I can hear the watering dripping!

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